trivial word placement
Rewrite the first sentence in the rule “Space Grinder” so that it reads,
The DDA Commander must never add a rule without lemurs in the wording.
The current wording makes no sense. I’ll let you guys read it and tell me if it makes sense as its currently written.
Comments
Yoda:
This is not a proposal. Even if it was, I would say
simply because the Space Girder rule was never supposed to make sense. In the Schitzophrenia (I hope I spelled that right) Dynasty, they had “Proposals must alter other proposals.” I think this is tame compared to that.
Rodlen:
Notice that the rule referred to is Space Grinder, not Space Girder.
Darknight:
well crud on both sides. thats what i get for having to pull an all nighter to deal with stuff. srry bout that guys