Tuesday, December 02, 2008

Plot seed

[I should point out that the Father Mackenzie plot seed from Nov. 24 is not on the plot summary page]

November 15: 8:40 PM
The scene: Joey Wong’s.  Father Mackenzie is getting sloshed at the bar.  Some frustrated-looking young man is sitting alone at a table- his date must be standing his up.  The rest of the usual cast of characters.

Alfredo Falsonome scowls at his two associates and waves a slender finger at them as if brandishing a stiletto.  “Shade is trying to pull it off again.  We have to stop him.  Get our people into place.  Everybody—including that slob at the newspaper stand.”

posted by spikebrennan at 02 Dec 2008 20:33:00 UTC Comments (6)

Comments

Bucky:

02-12-2008 21:44:55 UTC

It is your responsibility to add the seeds to the plot page, not Yoda’s.

Klisz:

03-12-2008 00:09:00 UTC

That, and the Plot Seed rule says you have to put your seeds under the current time on the current date, e.g. you can’t change the past.

Yoda:

03-12-2008 01:40:36 UTC

I went ahead and added the Nov 24 seed, but this one will not be added nor will it receive a pp.  Please remember to follow directions.

spikebrennan:

03-12-2008 13:52:55 UTC

Then consider this a request by me for the Narrator to add this to November 15.  (I recognize that this is not eligible for PP).

Yoda:

03-12-2008 15:15:43 UTC

No offence, but I really don’t see how this improves the plot at all.  We already have Jason at the restaurant and I think it is too early to bring Shade into the picture.

spikebrennan:

04-12-2008 15:44:23 UTC

It sets up Falsonome and his crew as adversaries to Shade.