Proposal: A Few Fixes
reached a quorum, final vote 7-0—Yoda
Adminned at 28 May 2008 10:47:29 UTC
Replace “Once per week” in the sub-rule 2.1.1 Energy Restock with “As a weekly action”.
Replace “the DDA Commander will create a story post” in the first paragraph of the sub-rule 2.2.2 Management with “the DDA Commander shall create a story post”.
Replace “In the post, the DDA Commander shall go on to enlist any number of Planar Entities, as long as those Planars are not DDA Members.” in the first paragraph of the sub-rule 2.2.2 Management with “In the post, the DDA Commander shall go on to list any number of Planar Entities who are not DDA members.”
Replace “If one of the listed Planars was already managed by a DDA Member, that Planar is no longer Managed.” in the first paragraph of the sub-rule 2.2.2 Management with “Any listed Planars that were already managed are no longer managed.”
Replace “A DDA Member’s Rank may be changed as a daily action to any oner of the ranks listed in the rule “Ranksâ€.” in the rule 2.3 Military with “As a daily action, a DDA Member may change his rank to any other rank in the sub-rule 2.3.1 “Ranks” for which he meets the requirements.”
Replace “unless their origin is current” in the rule 2.3 Military with “unless their OOO is currently”.
Replace “rule “Organizationsâ€.” in the rule 2.3 Military with “sub-rule “Organizationsâ€.”
Replace “DDA Member must have at least 25 Energy, and no other DDA Member may have the rank of Energy Clerk” in the sub-rule 2.3.1 Ranks with “DDA Member must have at least 25 Energy, and there must not be another DDA Member with the rank of Energy Clerk”.
Replace “No two Tech’s may share their name.” in the first paragraph of the rule 2.4 Technology with “No two Tech’s may have the same name.”
Replace “Each DDA Member keeps track of what Tech e owns in the GNDT in a column named Tech. The value of the Tech column is a list of Tech Code’s separated by commas, or “-†if the DDA Member owns no Tech.” in the third paragraph of the rule 2.4 Technology with “Each DDA Member keeps track of the Tech he owns in the “Member Dossiers” wiki page. Whenever a DDA Member acquires a Tech, that Tech’s Code is added to that DDA Member’s list of Techs in the wiki page. Whenever a DDA Member loses a Tech, that Tech’s Code is removed from that DDA Member’s list of Techs in the wiki page.”
Replace all instances of “it’s” in the first paragraph of 2.5 Spacecraft with “its”.
Amnistar: he/him
Some of that is typos (it’s ->its) but I agree with the rest of them :)