Sunday, May 26, 2024

Proposal: Editor’s Notes

Timed out, 2-0 with 1 DEF and Publisher voting FOR. Enacted by JonathanDark.

Adminned at 28 May 2024 17:43:25 UTC

In the rule “The Story”, after the first sentence, add this text:

The Story’s contents are flavor text.

In the subrule “Satisfaction”, replace each instance of “A sentences Satisfies an Element” with “A Fragment Satisfies an Element”.

In the subrule “Scoring”, replace “As a Virtual Action, a Storyteller may privately communicate” with “As a Virtual Action, a Storyteller may send”.

Add a new empty Category called “Fictional Countries”

Some fixes and a new Category.


Clucky: he/him

26-05-2024 19:10:40 UTC

“A Fragment Satisfies an Element” doesn’t work because its recursive in definition

You’re only a fragment if you satisfy all elements. So a fragment is always going to satisfy all elements inherently.

I think the proper solution is to just make fragments only one sentence long (this is how I thought it originally worked I must misread the rules)

Kevan: he/him

27-05-2024 18:48:19 UTC

imperial since I’m not sure what this is fixing or how significant Clucky’s objection is.

Clucky: he/him

27-05-2024 19:58:17 UTC


@Kevan the main thing its fixing is that fragments can be multiple sentences but then the rules apparently apply to a sentence not a fragment. So while this is still broken its also less broken than before.