BlogNomic: The Ninth Dynasty of ais523

How many bonus points do they get?  Other than that, I like it.

The bonus points each class gets are as follows: Wizard - Magic and Reveling.

Seems pretty clear to me they get one of each.

But there is no number associated.  It just says they get “bonus points”?

And thus its implied to be singular. The bonus points you get are A and B. Sure it could’ve been clearer… but I think its still fairly clear.

The problem is that it’s pluralized.

It’s not you get a bonus point in A and B, it’s you get bonus pointS in A and B.

But because you are getting in an A and B its plural.

i think he means one point in those areas. right clucky? i’m holding my vote till ya respond

hmmm…. i might reword this and repropose later if need be

In dynasties that reward you for a successful proposal, taking someone else’s proposal idea is a colossal jerk move.

Then why don’t you beat him to it?

lol ik but you are out of slots. thats why i said later. if i could i’d give ya any gold if my reword would pass

Also, I think it is way too ambiguous as it stands.  It needs to explicitly say 1, 2, 3, etc. points in each skill listed or list how many points each individual skill gets for each class, e.g. Wizard - Magic (2) and Reveling (1).

stop reading my mind damn it lol

It’s just the Jedi mind tricks.  *waves hand*  Forget you ever heard me say that.

lol nice. i walked right in to that

for my rewrite. and don’t worry clucky, i wored in a way for you to get credit for this

*worded

Don’t worry Mamn, I’m only shooting one of your kids in the face.

voting again so I can say

Nice try, though.

  Nice try, though

Nice try, though

(with 3 NTT I don’t lose any gold. yay =P)