Confusing language. First you specify a change, then you show what the original is?

Thats the paragraph after the change. So: “Change foo to bar, so that: ...”

You forgot to apply the change. That paragraph has no effect though, so it doesn’t matter.

It works, it’s just quoting a paragraph with no context.

Hm, a copy and paste fail on my first proposal, The quoated block should be:

“If the Lights are Off, a non-Dormant Guest may email the Executor with a list of at most five Dark Actions Dark Actions they wish to take, if they have not already done so since the Lights last went Off. This list is known as a Dark List. The possible Dark Actions are:-”

@Keba: Ah, I see. Though I must note that you are automatically counted as voting FOR your own proposal - you don’t need to make a vote comment.

In favor of the other one.