Seems valuable to also replace “pay” with “spend,” since the latter has much better guardrails from the appendix.

I normally wouldn’t pick a nit this fine but it’s already a nitpick proposal under the edit window, so: can the “, and” become a sentence break? Otherwise it’s ambiguous whether the Power Action is an atomic action, or “considering [it] to be an atomic action” is just another condition attached to “provided” - something that the performer has to briefly consider it to be, so as to do it.

addressed both issues I hope