Proposal: Proof reading
s/ked—Yoda
Adminned at 17 Nov 2008 10:08:02 UTC
If the Proposal titled “This is how you make locations” passed, then rewrite the location called “Sidewalk” so it reads,
This is a half-block stretch of the Main Street sidewalk. which bears heavy foot traffic during daylight hours. It is adjacent to a number of other locations, including the BuckyStar Café and its associated Alley. On Dec 25th, Jason Smith will be found here dead.
If the Proposal titled “This is how you make locations” failed, then rewrite the location called “Sidewalk” so it read,
On Dec 25th, Jason Smith will be found here dead.
Current wording makes it seem like he lives there.
We don’t even know if it is here that he will be found dead. All we have so far is an undisclosed location on the side of the road.
Bucky: