Monday, November 17, 2008

Proposal: Proof reading

s/ked—Yoda

Adminned at 17 Nov 2008 10:08:02 UTC

If the Proposal titled “This is how you make locations” passed, then rewrite the location called “Sidewalk” so it reads,

This is a half-block stretch of the Main Street sidewalk. which bears heavy foot traffic during daylight hours.  It is adjacent to a number of other locations, including the BuckyStar Café and its associated Alley. On Dec 25th, Jason Smith will be found here dead.

If the Proposal titled “This is how you make locations” failed, then rewrite the location called “Sidewalk” so it read,

On Dec 25th, Jason Smith will be found here dead.

Current wording makes it seem like he lives there.

Comments

Bucky:

17-11-2008 06:01:28 UTC

for

Yoda:

17-11-2008 06:08:59 UTC

against We don’t even know if it is here that he will be found dead.  All we have so far is an undisclosed location on the side of the road.

We could make it to where Jason Smith moves automatically between locations, though.

Darknight: he/him

17-11-2008 06:32:52 UTC

against S/K. Good point Yoda.