Monday, October 16, 2006

So that Clucky can still edit his proposal,

The sentence “A vegetable may not change eir activity for 24 hours after Protesting the Top Banana.” presumably applies while I am Protesting the Top Banana, so if my Activity is “Protesting the Top Banana” I can never change it.

Also, it’s vague whether a “protesting Vegetable” is one who has the Activity “Protesting the Top Banana” or one who has done the “Protest: DICE3” recently.

I suggest a total rewrite of that section.



16-10-2006 04:07:39 UTC

Clucky, please comment here when you’re done editing the proposal so I know when it’s safe to vote.

Clucky: he/him

16-10-2006 12:45:58 UTC

Ok. That better?


16-10-2006 15:43:54 UTC

Also, the first “sentence” of the protest paragraph is a fragment.

Clucky: he/him

16-10-2006 16:48:51 UTC

Bleh. I really didn’t read that over well did I.