Proposal: The OC
Reword the text in the rule “Tools of the Trade {M}” that reads “a Participant may add, remove, or change one character of a Mutable rule into a single other character” to read as follows:
a Participant may alter a Mutable rule by adding one instance of one character to that rule; removing one instance of one character from that rule; or changing one instance of a single character in that rule to another character
Reword the text in the rule “Focus {I}” that reads “A focus of * is numerically equivalent to 1 when you are spending or losing focus, but is numerically equivalent to 0 in all other circumstances” to read as follows:
A Participant with a Focus of * is considered to have a Focus equal to 0
After the paragraph beginning “If a Participant has at least 1 Focus, they can” in the rule “Focus {I}” append the following:
If a Participant has a Focus of * then they can, when attempting to perform a Heist Action, include “(Focus)” in the Dice Roller comment for the attempt. If they do so, and that action is successful, then their Focus becomes 0 and that Heist Action is Swift.
I think there’s a couple of intentional (?) loopholes here—the phrasing as written collapses to “may remove… one character… into a single other character,” for instance, and I don’t know who “you” is—but I don’t know how to use them to my own advantage, so.
JonathanDark: he/him
Tools of the Trade has been so fundamental to most of the wins so far, it’s surprising it hasn’t been hacked yet.