Wednesday, July 02, 2008

trivial word placement

Rewrite the first sentence in the rule “Space Grinder” so that it reads,

The DDA Commander must never add a rule without lemurs in the wording.

The current wording makes no sense. I’ll let you guys read it and tell me if it makes sense as its currently written.

Comments

Yoda:

07-03-2008 02:36:15 UTC

This is not a proposal.  Even if it was, I would say against  simply because the Space Girder rule was never supposed to make sense.  In the Schitzophrenia (I hope I spelled that right) Dynasty, they had “Proposals must alter other proposals.”  I think this is tame compared to that.

Rodlen:

07-03-2008 02:53:17 UTC

Notice that the rule referred to is Space Grinder, not Space Girder.

Darknight:

07-03-2008 04:31:41 UTC

well crud on both sides. thats what i get for having to pull an all nighter to deal with stuff. srry bout that guys