I think this proposal needs a second pass to make it more understandable. What is “On the “The Mosaic”, add” supposed to mean? Generally if you add something to the rules, you need to indicate where in the rules you want to add it not just which rule you want to add it to.

Also there is no concept of “During a Monks turn”. Turns are a resource that Monks spent, but the concept of a Monk’s turn isn’t actually defined for this dynasty.

Well I didn’t know how to word it correctly

A column on “The Mosaic” would mean a column on the 20x20 grid? This also creates three unnamed rules.

If you’re not sure how to word a proposal, try copying an existing proposal or rule which does a similar thing - even if you don’t understand why a rule sentence is talking about non-negative integers tracked on a wiki page, or why every proposal that creates a rule says something like “create a new rule called X with the following text”, you can safely assume that players thought that was okay if they voted it through.

[robotabc] If someone votes against their own proposal, as Raven has done here, then it’s taken as them formally withdrawing it (known as a “self-kill”). The proposal will fail, so requires no further voting from other players.

[Kevan] Whoops yeah I noticed about 3 seconds after I hit submit.

It’s easy enough to overlook if the proposer doesn’t say anything when casting the vote.