I think we need to keep the sentence about fertilizing it moving it to the next stage, since otherwise it can just be fertilized endlessly and still remain in the “Unfertilized” stage.

Also, I there’s nothing in here preventing Choanocytes from nourishing unfertilized eggs, since it still says that they “require any nutrient”.

I left those out to reduce complexity. I’m trying to do it as small of a change as possible.

I suspect it’s a bad idea to start nourishing eggs without fertilization. You need allies.  And a cluster who belongs to everyone is interesting.

I think a being with external conception would find all of our mechanics of this sort to be very lewd.

Nomic, 18+ lol

Currently fertilized and unfertilized are stages that an egg sack has. Maybe it would be simpler to remove those from the stages. Then just make fertilized and unfertilized states and egg sack can have.

I don’t think it works the way it is, derrick.  It would be a small change, you just need to keep the sentence about fertilizing advancing stage and specify that unfertilized eggs do not “require” any nutrients.

Restricted fertilizing to four times,  Made it advance a stage, and required it to be done before nourishing.

Ok, I think that’s good.  There seems to be some coding error where the comment is inside the last blockquote, but that’s a typo, clearly.

You somehow put the comment box inside a quote.

Will Fix when I’m on a real computer. Thanks.

FTFY, you forgot to close that last blockquote tag.

[card] Anyone can correct typos in the ruleset, but players can only fix proposal typos in “their own” proposals. I’ve rolled the revision back.

[Kevan] Ah.

block quote added. should look better now.