After looking a bit more closely at the ruleset, I’m a little worried that the last sentence of The Story could be considered a Fragment in the Judging and therefore should be assigned a score, which may end up giving 1 additional point to whoever authored the last sentence of the story. Although Storytellers allocate Score “to Fragments according to the numbered list,” the Fragment Scoring action has no such restriction and Total Score for a Fragment is “one plus the Pending Score for that Fragment.”

Ah, the problematic part of the rules is “For each Fragment in the Judging,” and I suppose one could argue that this new sentence from the end of The Story could also be considered a Fragment if it met the criteria for one. It would have to include all of the Current Elements to be a valid Fragment.

I think the simplest fix would be to change it to “each Fragment in the numbered list in the Judging” but it’s too late to edit this now.

If other folks like this idea, we could either patch it later, or if the issue pointed out is too objectionable, I can re-propose it. I don’t want to do that unless there’s sufficient interest, though.