Monday, July 21, 2025

Story Post: Broil and Unload Cooked Kebabs in the Yard

Skewer, grill, plate, serve. Skewer, grill, plate, serve. The street food market is bustling tonight, with customers lining up at every food truck. There are sure to be some influencers and food critics in the crowd, not to mention tourists with serious money to spend. Could this be your chance to make it big?

posted by JonathanDark at 21 Jul 2025 12:41:00 UTC Comments (3)

Comments

Clucky: he/him

21-07-2025 15:13:26 UTC

Score 5. The “in the Yard” but feels a bit clunky but other than that no real notes. Solid dynasty idea + solid title feels fitting of a five.

Darknight: he/him

21-07-2025 16:07:42 UTC

Score 5, we could use a food truck management dynasty

Bucky:

21-07-2025 17:31:41 UTC

Score 2 because of some logical problems with the sequencing (why am I broiling them when they’re already cooked?) and because it’s not particularly exciting even after amending that.

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