Tuesday, July 15, 2025

Story Post: Don’t Anger a Raging King and Ensue Necessitated Everlasting Death

Angering kings is usually not a good idea if you want to stay alive.

Comments

Clucky: he/him

15-07-2025 03:44:35 UTC

Score 2 would be a 3 but docking it a point for being the third entry to use “don’t” find new material

Trapdoorspyder: he/him

15-07-2025 04:25:26 UTC

Score 4 for me personally, it seems like a perfectly sensible quote

Kevan: he/him

15-07-2025 06:19:12 UTC

Score 2 for redundancy; a raging king would already be angered, all death is everlasting. The word “ensue” also doesn’t seem to be being used correctly.

Josh: he/they

15-07-2025 07:24:12 UTC

Score 4. Since when did sayings rigourously avoid pleonasm?

Bucky:

15-07-2025 07:51:07 UTC

Score 2 as this only half makes sense to me.

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