Monday, June 24, 2024

Proposal: Proofreading: No Passive Heroines

Popular, 3-0. Enacted by JonathanDark.

Adminned at 26 Jun 2024 22:31:43 UTC

In the story replace

“the yells for help inside grew silent.”

with

“and the yells for help grew louder.”

Not a fan of how the current story makes June essentially sit back while people are burned to death. This change would allow her to leap into action to save them!

Comments

Darknight: he/him

25-06-2024 03:36:22 UTC

for

GloopyGhost:

25-06-2024 04:31:24 UTC

for
Save June’s family!

JonathanDark: he/him

25-06-2024 05:21:53 UTC

imperial

Clucky: Puzzle Master he/him

25-06-2024 05:42:32 UTC

@JonathanDark a reminder that because this is a proof reading you’re legally not allowed to vote on this. (which is functionally the same as you voting def but technically different)

JonathanDark: he/him

25-06-2024 14:32:28 UTC

Thanks for the reminder! Whoever admins this, ignore my vote as it was illegal.