Proposal: Proofreading: No Passive Heroines
Popular, 3-0. Enacted by JonathanDark.
Adminned at 26 Jun 2024 22:31:43 UTC
In the story replace
“the yells for help inside grew silent.”
with
“and the yells for help grew louder.”
Not a fan of how the current story makes June essentially sit back while people are burned to death. This change would allow her to leap into action to save them!
Darknight: he/him